THE TRIALS: Path Toward Godhood. (warning: MATURE CONTENT) Your opinion on the two volumes

With the last interlude I posted few minutes ago, the volu 2 is finished.

It wasn't easy. At first I never thought I would write so much. I thought that I would enter the Canon in one or three chapters max. But I wanted to try sothing different. I wonder if I succeeded?

Anyway how did you like those two volus? Your opinion matters because it's by listening to criticism and reviews that I can beco a better author.