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Hello readers, it's been a while >:3.

As I always do I want to make so changes in the next volu. But compared to others these changes can be a bit intimidating.

1. First person POV (protagonist).

The most obvious fact is the change in the protagonist's POV. I decided to move to the first person in the next volu. Instead of saying "Asha was not satisfied with this result" will be sothing more like "Although it was not my liking, there was nothing that could be done."

Secondary characters will still be written in the third person except for the protagonist. This change could give the story a different tone, as the reader will closely follow the protagonist's unconventional way of perceiving the world through his powers.

The old model was intentionally adopted because I didn't have the skills to describe the protagonist in any other way.

2. Chapter structure

You've already seen this change in the last few chapters, "Asha and ntal Problems (1-3)" "Intermission". In the next volu, the chapters will have sequences based on a larger plot rather than individual and spontaneous plots as before. The goal is to aim the plot in a more objective direction.

3. Volu structure

The volus will be larger (25~?? chapters). This volu, for example, will be called "Cautious Peridot". It will be a larger volu compared to the others and it will also be the last volu before the canon.

# Final considerations

This can be a bit concerning but we are still in the early stages of this story. Probably there will be at least 200 chapters ahead. This story was planned to be long in the first place. Those changes were made to increase my productivity and of course, increase my fun.

Following the previous model with low productivity, it would be impossible to end this story in less than 3 years. The new model is much faster and simpler to write, which will alleviate much of my headache.

I hope the changes will be positive for the story; I'm really excited to start writing in this new format. It was sothing I thought of while studying other authors I loved. The way they organized the chapters was so practical and beautiful that I decided to incorporate so of those changes here.

As always, I hope you have fun too. See you in the next volus.

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