"It is hard to explain, because you live life on the third-dinsional plane," he said. "When you cross over into the fourth dinsion, everything changes. Not just your position—your concept of identity, of permanence, of ti."
The crimson mist stirred at his feet. The spires trembled, low and steady.
"But then things beco even more problematic on another scale," he continued. "The value of life... dwindles. Often."
He paused, his gaze tightening, the red veins beneath his skin glowing a shade brighter.
"I don’t know what lies beyond the fourth dinsion," he said. "That’s a door I haven’t reached. But it is... pleasant, I’ll admit, to speak with soone beneath ."
His expression shifted—no mockery, no pride. Just a subtle change in weight behind his voice.
"I don’t an that negatively. I should add that."
Elias’s glow flickered, his voice faint but steady, cutting through the hum of the spires.
"None taken... I think?" he said, the words a whisper, a thread of uncertainty in the void, his glow pulsing with the effort. The ache of Kikaru’s absence, of Dot’s capture, pressed deeper into his form—still there, still anchoring him.
The godless crucifix stepped closer, the crimson mist curling around his boots, the spires trembling with each movent. Their whispers grew louder, layered voices rising in fractured harmony—a chorus of trapped souls, each pleading for sothing none of them could na.
"I don’t quite understand so things... if I have ti to ask?" Elias asked.
His voice trembled with a mix of fear and resolve. The ache hadn’t faded, and neither had the image of Dot suspended nearby, her glow dim but constant.
The godless crucifix’s smile widened, his claws flexing lightly around her orb. Dot’s glow dimd slightly in response, a faint whine slipping from her as she stirred in her sleep.
"Sure," he said, his voice low, resonant, each syllable trailing into the Expanse like it had been there before.
"And of course, ti is... well, it’s an object that is both punishing and kind depending on where you stand."
His eyes narrowed slightly, the red veins beneath his skin glowing brighter as he finished.
"When you stand in this place, it is kind... and listens."
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Elias’s glow pulsed, his voice trembling with uncertainty.
"I... I don’t think I understand fully?" he said, the words a whisper, a thread of confusion in the void, his glow flickering with the effort. The ache of Kikaru’s absence, of Dot’s capture, weighed heavily on his fading form.
The godless crucifix stepped back, the spires trembling with him, their whispers rising into sothing more layered. The voices deepened—not louder, but denser, the hum beginning to resonate through the tiles beneath them. Spirit echoes moving between fractures.
"No one does, truly," he said, his voice steady, unyielding. The red veins beneath his skin flared brighter, pulsing along his throat, down his wrists.
"Ti itself operates above the fourth dinsion. What you call minutes, hours, or years—those are fixed on the third. Up here, it doesn’t flow... it flickers. It bends, folds, loops around places that call it, ignores others entirely."
He raised a hand, letting the glow from his claw tips scatter across the crimson mist.
"We don’t travel through ti. We land in pockets of it. We glimpse segnts like broken mirrors. Your soul—right now—resides between two such folds."
He paused.
His gaze sharpened, the red lining of his cloak catching fractured starlight, the obsidian beneath flashing faint reflections in return. A wave passed through the spires, like breath through a frozen choir.
"A story for another ti, really," he added. "But please... do ask away."
Elias’s glow pulsed again, dim but steady. His voice cut through the Expanse with more strength this ti.
"Who is this friend?" he asked. The weight still pressed behind the words—Kikaru, Dot, everything he couldn’t reach—but it no longer dragged them down.
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The godless crucifix’s smile softened, a glint of respect in his silver eyes as he lowered Elias’s soul, the blue glow pulsing faintly in his grip.
"I call him Alec Vunenlind," he said, his voice resonant, each word a hum that echoed through the Expanse, the crimson mist swirling at his feet.
"He was a brave man during his life. Made his share of mistakes. Fought the wrong wars. But he changed. Grew. Chose the harder road even when it broke him."
The glow in his eyes dimd slightly.
"He also opposed the ideals of the Cube maker. Publicly. Loudly."
He let the sentence stretch.
"And because he couldn’t be killed... they jailed him."
Elias’s glow flickered, his voice trembling with confusion.
"Okay, but... you just said you could be killed," he said, the words a whisper, a thread of uncertainty in the void, his glow pulsing with the effort.
"Why can’t he be?"
The godless crucifix stepped back, slow and deliberate, the spires behind him trembling as he moved. Their whispers deepened—less like pleading now, more like rembering.
"There are ways to reach immortality," he said, his voice steady, unyielding. The red veins beneath his skin glowed brighter as he spoke.
"Most of them aren’t pleasant."
He raised one clawed hand and drew a slow arc through the mist, letting it twist around his fingers.
"He earned it through an assortnt of relics. Pieces burned into him. Items forged from the collapse of soul hosts. Dozens—maybe hundreds—of bodies. Spirit energy made physical. Layered. Hardened."
His hand lowered again.
"But now, he’s like you," he added. "Just a soul trapped in a jar. Breathing without lungs. Conscious without ti. Waiting."
Elias’s glow pulsed, his voice faint but steady, cutting through the hum of the spires.
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