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"Bammmm!" Both of our swords clashed loudly and I felt like a monster had crashed into .
The force of collision travel inside my body, injuring
internally, I can feel small ruptures in my internal organs and blood that is coming up.
If not for
having montum that crashed with, I would have directly flown away out of the ring.
I blew back and having a hard ti controlling myself that when I saw she is coming after
and I am in no condition to defend myself against her.
I her sword ca closer, I started to think of a way to save myself as I know, it got hit by that sword, I will receive defeat with a heavy injury.
Suddenly an idea cos in my head and I ignited two biggest jets under my feet, not caring if I am able to control my jump with an existing force that is traveling in my body.
"Furfur!" I shot out like a deflated balloon in the air not able to control my trajectory.
I just hope that the jump wouldn’t take
out of the ring area or I will be declared loser.
’Sky steps!’ ’crack!’ I activated sky to stops myself going further, but it splintered bone of my leg little.
Creating another foothold, I took a jump again while taking a big sip of life potion.
The next mont, a cool sensation traveled my body, filling the supply of my nearly drained mana.
Fire Strike! I activated fire strike when I falling from up, it was for both offense defense as she had been waiting down below for
like a crocodile, ready to gulp in single bute.
Sensing the power fluctuation from , she had unhesitatingly enlarged the shield in her left hand.
Three bolts of fire left my sword while her shield was still engaging but that didn’t affect her from perfectly defending against my attack.
"Thud!" I landed safely in the ring while she looks at
with utter shock, I can understand why she had such expression and this is also the reason I didn’t want to expose my knight grade skill.
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