Loopbreaker Book 2 - Redoing the 2nd Book - Need some help

Hey all.

I'm sitting down and reworking on book 2. Sadly the ntal state I was in when I wrote book 1 and the ntal state when I wrote book 2 were two totally different things. Beyond so dical stuff as well as the chemical changes from dicine my doctor had prescribed, I tried to juggle 6 stories and ended up ssing up more than I succeeded.

As such i'm sitting down and going through book 2 again, doing whatever I need to do in order to fix the shortcomings from book 2.

The genuine version of this novel can be found on another site. Support the author by reading it there.

So this is where I reach out to you and ask if you're willing to share with in this post the things that stands out the most and need fixing. I want to get it right and I have no problem admitting that I bit off more than I could chew.

I've made a bunch of changes in my personal life. From blood tests, new dication, exercise, a little ditation, and more.

I'm back to writing and doing what I love.

So if you're willing, post what you think needs to be fixed for book 2. I'll check back in a few days, comnt and then periodically check back in and update things.

Thanks again to everyone willing to help.