This volu is called "Pure Land".
Frankly speaking, this volu gave
a lot of confidence, not only because I completed the FLAG that lasted for ten thousand days and a month in the Nagano chapter, but also because my grades were rising.
The biggest difficulty for online article authors should be to find the right path among the "comnts"...
Although I was scolded by my trainee every day.
However, the rising performance proves that I don’t need to pay attention to these voices.
The road is still long, let’s walk slowly.
After writing the second volu and looking back, I found that I have a writing habit, which is to pay too much attention to the "inheritance, transition, and connection" between two stories.
I tend to unwisely write several transitional chapters after a climax.
For , this is not easy to write. It takes ti to ensure sufficient emotion in each chapter.
For readers, this may not be good enough, because they do not see the actual advancent of the plot, and subscriptions will also show a real-ti decline.
But for the story...this is important.
The ups and downs, gatherings and separations all require comparison. What I want to write is not just a story about "the protagonist becos stronger". At least in the Nagano in my heart, there is a group of people who are busy with their own affairs every day. Rushing.
The novel would be more compact and read better.
If the novel slows down a bit, it's actually not that bad.
The last chapter of this volu is called "About Life and Death."
What Gu Shen and Chu Ling said about life and death... are actually the exploration of the aning of the "Pure Land".
After the cetery, the climax gradually died down.
I didn't expect the second volu to end like this.
In the original final chapter, there are actually many plots of "Going South
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