Pierre’s fingers flew across the screen.
moryMan404:
"The physical contact is rely the conduit." Right. And I suppose it’s just coincidence that this "conduit" always involves groping won? Strange how Jack never needs to touch his male crew mbers for these power-ups.
Your comrcial success doesn’t validate your writing. Fast food is popular too, but that doesn’t make it good cuisine. You’ve created the literary equivalent of a greasy burger – montarily satisfying to the undiscerning, but ultimately bad for them.
The real insult is that you’re clearly capable of better. The Mist Island arc had genuine tension and mystery before you ruined it by introducing the "Mist Maidens" whose clothes conveniently dissolved in the fog. You build interesting female characters only to reduce them to walking power batteries for your protagonist.
I don’t need to write my own story to recognize diocrity when I see it.
This was no longer about the wasted hours – it was about principle. The author responded within minutes.
PLGA_Author:
You want to talk about principles? How about the principle of respecting creative work? You consud MY creation, then co here to insult it? Your entitlent is showing.
And for your information, Jack DOES share energy with male crew mbers – it’s called the "Brotherhood Bond" and was introduced in Chapter 827. Not my fault you didn’t read that far. Maybe do your research before spewing ignorant criticism?
You claim to care about female characters while simultaneously dismissing my female readers who LOVE these characters. The Mist Maidens arc has so of the highest ratings among my female audience. But I suppose you know better than them what won should enjoy?
You’re just another toxic "fan" who thinks creators owe you sothing. Don’t like my story? Move on. There are millions of other novels out there. But you won’t, will you? Because deep down, you’re invested. You’ll probably read Chapter 359 tomorrow while pretending to hate it.
moryMan404:
The "Brotherhood Bond" – let guess, that involves a firm handshake rather than groping? How convenient. And I’m supposed to slog through 827 Chapters before your protagonist develops a non-sexual power-up thod? That’s not the defense you think it is.
I don’t dismiss your female readers. I question whether they exist in the numbers you claim. The comnts section is full of usernas like "BigDaddy69" and "XxDragonSlayerxX" gushing about the "plot." Not exactly a female demographic.
And no, I won’t be reading Chapter 359. I’d rather stare at a wall for six hours than subject myself to more of Captain Steelheart’s "adventures." I only made it this far on the recomndation of a friend who apparently suffered brain damage recently.
The truly sad part is that you’ve created a fascinating world full of potential, then populated it with the literary equivalent of inflatable dolls. It’s like watching soone use a Stradivarius to play "Hot Cross Buns."
Pierre hit send and his screen imdiately flashed with a new notification. Soone else had joined the conversation.
OneAboveAll:
Dude, calm down. It’s just a web novel. Not everything needs to be high literature. PLGA is just writing what people enjoy reading. If it’s not for you, that’s cool, but this level of rage is unnecessary.
Rember, The architect gives the people what they deserve. Not what they want.
Pierre scoffed. A white knight defender. Perfect.
moryMan404:
Oh look, a loyal fan cos to defend this trash. Let guess, you’ve read all 2000 Chapters? Do you have Raven body pillows too? People like you are why quality standards have collapsed. "It’s just entertainnt" is the battle cry of diocrity. So of us expect better, even from web novels.
OneAboveAll:
Wow, you’re really worked up about this. For what it’s worth, I’ve only read about 500 Chapters. It’s my guilty pleasure during lunch breaks. Not everything needs to be analyzed to death. Sotis a boobie power-up is just a boobie power-up, you know?
Also, look left.
Pierre’s screen wavered. The crisp text of the review thread bled at the edges, letters contorting into unrecognizable, jagged symbols as if the code itself were screaming.
"Look left?" Pierre muttered. "What kind of weird role-playing—"
The deafening blast of a horn cut through the night.
Pierre’s head snapped left, toward the street-facing wall of his apartnt. Twin suns ignited outside, flooding his living room with a white-hot glare that bleached all color from the world.
Before he could even rise, the truck smashed through his wall, and the world beca a storm of concrete, glass, and tal. The last thing Pierre saw was his tablet flying across the room, screen still glowing with the WebNovel app.
Then darkness.
PLGA_Author:
moryMan404? Hello? Did you give up? I was enjoying our little debate. Co on, tell more about my "inflatable doll" characters. I’m taking notes for Chapter 2357!
OneAboveAll:
I think he’s gone. Sha. He was just getting to the good part.
PLGA_Author:
These rage-quitters, I swear. They talk big ga but can’t handle when authors fight back. Thanks for the support, by the way. Always nice to et a fan.
OneAboveAll:
No problem. So readers take fiction way too seriously.
By the way, I’m loving the current arc with the Sky Island Priestesses. The scene where they perform the "Celestial Blessing" on Jack was... inspired.
PLGA_Author:
Wait until you see what happens in Chapter 521. Let’s just say the Blessing gets... reciprocated. 😉
OneAboveAll:
Looking forward to it. Truck-kun sends his regards.
PLGA_Author:
...What? Like that ?
OneAboveAll:
Nothing. Just an inside joke. Keep up the good work!
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