Is it wrong to be an Elf in a Dungeon? Character Image

First I would like to say, what the heck I have written? When I got a review, which stated I have written many sentences, that don't make sense, I was wondering what the heck was going wrong. After thinking about it, I didn't find anything, until I re-read the chapters that made go through self-doubt, wondering If I had written it while drunk(I don't drink alcohol), well the thing was obvious, while the part where maid was concerned, I don't give a shit about it by the way. Maid has hots for Mc, any problem with that bro? Go and read Self-Castrated fic.

But he had point in the English, well to be honest it is my mistake. I am very busy and often write chapters in a hurry. I use grammarly to fix the grammar but don't do proofreading, sotis when I have ti, I do, and sotis I don't. That was the result. I will revise the chapters, maybe not all mistakes will be fixed, but majority of them will be.

Secondly, here are the character Images.

Goddess Aurora Normal Form(Mortal Form):

Goddess Aurora when her Divinity is Unleashed:

Goddess Aurora when she is really Angry and her entire Divinity is leaking out:

That's for the Images, she looks the like the first two, and this third is just for an imaginary scenario, where her entire Divinity is unleased