Hello everyone!
After almost a year of writing and editing, the rewrite is finally complete!
2 chapters will be posted a week on Mondays and Thursdays until book 1 has been fully posted. The original (which I shall refer to as the 'First Draft') will remain uploaded as its separate volu.
For any newcors, this story takes place in a universe where humans evolved upon an ocean world.
These humans were landlocked upon their native continent, making their way to the second industrial revolution before discovering other landmasses across the world.
Book 1 covers the journey of the first successful expedition to these foreign lands, which are inhabited by many strange and alien creatures.
For returning readers, I ended up making quite a few changes, as well as completely rewriting the first 120k words or so (with so significant changes to the rest)
The biggest worldbuilding changes are (spoilers for new readers):
Spoiler
The dragons now know about humanity through flotsam that managed to drift across the ocean through the ages. As such, humans are seen a sort of alien cryptid in their culture - ones with abilities to create otherworldly constructs.
The story now also covers the events leading up to the first landfall covered in the original story.
I could post an exhaustive list of changes at the end of this volu, if that's sothing that people would like to see.
This story of mine was inspired by works like The Martian and Project Hail Mary (By Andy Weir), and the Teraire series (By Naomi Novik).
VikasRao on Deviantart has also been a great help in providing and inspiring ideas for this story, and their work on speculatively biology (featuring realistic dragons) is insanely detailed.
I wrote this story for several reasons, but mostly in an attempt to cover a more interesting and sensible first contact scenario. I also wanted to create a "magical" world without magic – reality can be stranger and far more interesting than fiction, after all.
Reference information
Earth:
Alt-Earth (In Real Units)EarthMass4.7725×10^24 kg5.97×10^24 kgRadius6371 km6371 kmGravity7.85 m/s^2 (80% Earth gravity)9.81 m/s^2Day24 hours24 hoursMagnetic field15,000 - 55,000 nT (Slightly weaker than Earth's due more iron and less nickel within its core)25,000 - 65,000 nTDistance from sun1.1 AU (163.480 million km)
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Perihelion: 161,807,881 km
Aphelion: 167,307,471 km
1 AU (148.93 million km)
Perihelion: 147,098,074
Aphelion: 152,097,701
Intensity of Energy received from Sun1124 W/m^21360 W/m^2Atmospheric Pressure1.5 atm, 152.0 kPa1 atm, 101.3 kPaAtmospheric Composition79.63% Nitrogen
18.31% Oxygen
2.045% Argon
0.015% CO2, H2, & trace gasses
78.08% Nitrogen
20.95% Oxygen
0.93% Argon
0.04% CO2 & trace gases
Average Temperature16.1°C13.9°C
Moon:
Alt-Moon
Real Moon
Mass
1.62% of IRL Earth
or
9.79689745 × 1022 kilograms
1.2% of Earth
or
7.34767309 × 1022 kilograms
Diater
3,814 km
3,474.8 km
Orbital Period
35 days, 1.3 hours
27 days
Average Orbital Distance
422,100 km
384,400 km
Scientific Units:
Alt-EarthReal Unitsasurent of LengthSa as Real Unit, as it was initially based on 1/10,000 of the distance from equator to north pole.
Redefined using a physical bar of tal.
Plans to be defined as 1650763.73 wavelengths of the orange-red emission line in the electromagnetic spectrum of the krypton-86 atom in a vacuum are in progress.
Distance light travels in 1/299792458 of a secondasurent of Mass1 liter (dm^3) of water at max density, higher atmospheric pressure ans 1 alt-kg is greater than 1 kg, but by an insignificant amount.
NOTE: Mass =/= weight
Since gravity is 80% earth gravity, 100 kg on a scale will show 80 kg.
100 kg is still 100 kg on this planet, it just weighs less.
Defined in terms of planck constantasurent of Ti1 second = 1/31556925.9747 of a year
Other units of ti are divided the sa as Real Ti
Ti it takes for caesium 133 atom, to vibrate 9,192,631,770 tisasurent of Temperature
Like the tric system, this world uses the freezing point of water as 0° while the boiling point is 100°. However, the thicker atmosphere causes the boiling point of water to be a little higher, aning their 100° is actually our 111.91°C.
The freezing point of water is not significantly affected by the difference in atmospheric pressure.
lting Point of water @1 atm = 0°C
Boiling Point of water @1 atm = 100°C
(Currently defined by Kelvin, which is defined by the Boltzmann constant)
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