UPDATE
I will list out the changes below. With each explanation I will do so kind of reasoning behind it. Hopefully you agree.
Naruto World -
I made everyone older. Its been bothering for a while. Originally I wanted to stick as close to canon as possible, but the more I wrote the more I realized it didn't matter. So yeah, everyone is a few years older.
I changed the na of his maid, Hina, to Mio. I really don't know why I nad her Hina, it was too close to Hinata
I got rid of adding Tayuya to the harem (the lackey of Orochimaru's). I originally killed her off because she didn't pan out like I wanted, but I decided to just get rid of her.
My Hero Academia
Changed Give and Take (which focused on temperature manipulation) to Disperse. Basically the sa thing except with kinetic energy. I may change it again when he gets back to Manga Hall, so I wouldn't worry about it.
One Piece
Weston didn't awaken Nen in Hancock, Nami, and Robin. It felt kind of pointless. He was too reckless with Nen at this point.
Side Worlds
Got rid of so smut worlds where he didn't gain anything in his status screen. Specifically the Harem World.
End of Book 3
Weston didn't get a Summon or Companion. So no Hancock
Original Reasoning - I originally wanted her in the story because comnts complained that I was making up too many characters. So I thought, why not just have a constant character so I didn't have to make up people not in canon.
I felt it worked slightly, but not as well as I hoped.
Since there was no Hancock, I changed the conversation with Mikhail and Weston. Revealing so information Weston didn't know. This is probably worth checking out.
The ti between the next Challenges changed from 2000 days to 1000 days.
No Manhwa - He went straight to Comics
I feel like this was the biggest cause of my issues with the story. Manhwa is not good for fanfics. There are too few characters like in Manga. It all focuses on the main character with a cheat, and it just doesn't feel exciting to write. I did like my Solo Leveling ending, but that was about it.
Book 4 Chapter 86 was added. After 300 World, Weston went to The Walking Dead and Sin City. This single chapter has an explanation for both worlds. Walking Dead wasn't as worthwhile without the other Weston
Weston got a skill called Reap in Sin City. Which increases how much damage soone takes depending on the sins of their past. Also Weston can see the mories of their worst sins.
He also received Dual Processing and a 10 day vacation for clearing three worlds, like what happened in the Manga Hall.
I have sothing planned for Reap and the Vacation soon.
Book 5
No manhwa ans no book 5.
I plan to start writing the story again. I already have the next arcs planned out. The whole reason for this change was I would like to finish the story. With how the story was going, I was never going to finish it. I do have ideas for Book halls, but might do a different fanfic for those later. Either way this story will most likely focus on Manga and Comics. There was just too much going on and I would like to work toward an actual ending rather than so 1000 chapter series that made you rember a bunch of crap that didn't matter.
I am not sure what I will do with smut. I will most likely tone it down. Just not as big of a focus for so reason.
Next will be so DC, then Marvel, and taking the story in a new direction. At the end of the new book 5, Challenges will start up again. These will be a lot different than the previous kind. I know you will like them a lot more.
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