Broker Volume 2 Opening Overhaul

Hey everybody, I've been working hard in the background to keep improving the story. With the edits in progress for Book 2 it was finally ti to knock out the last chunk of larger modifications (outside of grammatical fixes with my editor) I wanted to make to ensure that it shined. As such, I've finally updated the beginning of the book to balance everything out and make sure that Sonya gets the focus that she deserves.

Lillian's initial story is obviously still there, however I have written four new chapters that will beco numbered chapters in the official release (I will be listing them as Prologues here). They will not be from her POV. Other than that the affected chapters will be so of the chapters in the range of 91-99. So will remain unchanged but several will have modified scenes featuring Sonya as the POV rather than Lillian. These chapters have already been modified. As an aside I am also looking into moving the position of the first Lillian side-story and renaming it Camp 1.

I'd love to hear feedback on these new updates!

Thanks again for reading Broker, heroes and villains. It's thanks to you that I'm able to continue to do this full ti. I want to make this series the best it can be, so here's my latest effort.

Be kind to one another,

Derelict Presence